Nd lonely did i walk in those moonlit shores
Wid fuming desires nd sensual delights
Nd shackles of silence blew a gusty breeze...
In front of those cutest eyes, while losing my senses
Nd at the end of dat emptiness, which spread a fragrance
Of her violet blanket, which slowly covered me!
Nd while listening to her heartbeat, there spread a smell of desire...
Dark nd cloudy storms surrounded my way
Nd I was losing even the newest dawns... forever...
In the chill of dat winter morning, she flew away
Piercing the deepest recess of my soul...forever
20 comments:
aha kurachu naal manassamadhanam undayirunnu[:p]
desp poem um aayitt midhun ithaa ethiyalloo!!!!!
anyways nannayittund....thanne namichedo
kidilam poem..pakshe ini ithu venda kettaa[:P]
hehe..athentha molu vendathee??[:D]
heyaa d poem reminds me of u losing sum1 soo close 2 ur heart......am i rite mr.mephisto? :p
but d theme is similar 2 dprevious 1 and u shud try sumthing different u know coz u have got d potential 2 move on more higher grounds.
keep blogging buddy....luv ya :)
are you writing for your fulfillment or making someone know how much you miss her or him?i said this coz the previous one too had the same message to convey.nice blog, but you need to be practical in life and i wish the poem is NOT born frm your own experiences, go on man.nice work by the way.its awesome work after this long break
hehe entha parayuka ....nannayi ennu parayanamennundu pakshe iyaalude odukathe desp adi enne pandaramadakkum mikavarum.
by literary standards the poem is awesome pakshe if u stick to this theme ur skill will stagnate. athu kondu ini aduthathu oru pleasant theme ezhuthu plzzzz ente apekshaaaaanu
Ohh gawd!!!
bak again wid a mindblowing spear!!![:)]This is certainly gonna mov someones'obstiante
heart...lawlzzzz
and keepin writin dear...... :)
midhuneeee..... kalakkiyedaaa mone.... oru neenda idavelakku shesham... bak with a bang!!! [:D]
nyways, as others say, try changin the theme and writing...
keep on going dude!!!!
gud one...pinne lavalu parannenkil parakkattu chettoo...namukku vere thappam :p
hehe...ninakkangane okke parayamm...ninte kaaryam settled aanallooo...ini angu paranna mathiyalloooo[:p]
kolllaaadaaa.............ellam manassil akunundeeeee
So dis is midhun, right?
Literally d poem is zimply ausum dear.Read it many a times nd luved it too.But the core of both d pieces is d same-"lost", "broken".Change d theme which will certainly solace yur heart.Good going and keep writng.
chettaa..spaar poem...sherikkum kidu..ee desp adi nirthanam ktoo
nee paranjillelum njan ariyum..stupid[:d]
edaa alavalathi...enthokkeyada ezhuthi pidippichirikkunneyy?ninakk vattaya??enthu nalla chekkan aarnu nee??valla paniyum oppicho nee??blog motham njan vaayichu theerthu.chilathokke enikkum manassilakumedaaa.
enthayalum ninte veetukare kaanan pattumonnu njan onnu nokkatte.oru niraasha kaamukan vannirikkunnuuuu.....ellam thurannu paranju ente munnil surrender cheythaal punishment kurachu tharam ketto chakkara kuttaa.illankil paara sure...............
kollam kollam,,visheshippikan vaakukal illaa
paranjathil santhooosham!!!!
Yo man midhun....I am too late in cin this blog...Anyway it is a gud one...To be honest I oly understood it partially...Will read it once more when I get time...:-)
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