Sunday, April 8, 2007

In-excusable

Wid patience did I wait,
Til d shade fell on ma enraged soul,
But fortune proved unkind,
With d (old) sweetheart of mine.

I'm nt saying I'll b sorry (again)
For all d things that I made u cry
I can't say I'll always do everythng u want me to do,
Nd I can't assure u I'll b true always....


But experience made me know
That you heart ws full of woe,
Coz dat true love is absent from me now
Neither did I kno (discovered) wat it is....

Farewell, my joy nd heart,
Since u nd I must part,coz
U are the fairest one I hd eva seen
Nd I never fetch up a design.....

To alter ma worst mind.

But I'm obliged to remain for u nd
In tears, will I spend the whole night.

8 comments:

Anonymous said...

kidu chettuuuuuuuuu kiduuuu..ini njanennano oru kavitha ezhuthunnathhu..sigh!

Anonymous said...

enikk thonni desp aayirikkumennu.vicharicha pole thanne sambhavichu.
keep it up mitts

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Unknown said...

Kollaam....Exactly wht is ur problem...??? U didn't understand her or she didn't understand u or u didn't know wht is love...Finally u made a change frm insultin urself to such a interesting poem...:-)...Keep ritin....

Unknown said...

hey, awesome poem dear!crush right?[;)]

pratheesh said...

daeee.........kollaam.......

c.H.a.O.s FrEaK said...

njaan onnum parayunnilla....

jeevitham muzhuvan desp adichirunno kettoo !!

Anonymous said...

ohh bak after a long time , rite?[:)]

nice poem by d way dear,think u are missing someone.....err i just guessed [:d]
the music too is a good one.

keep blogging dear frnd,and take care too!!!

mrudhu said...

encore!!:) a diff take on love i would say..keep writin!