Eternal night!!!
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andering in the valley of dreams....the valley of those shattered, unfulfilled dreams....in solitude... in absolute solitude....hmmm....He seldom used to meet her dere...One nite, wen the tears frm his eyes got frozen, he told her, "Honey, if you come with me, we can stay forever,till the end...so dat no one can set us apart....".
She smiled, the light of her smile made the tears melt down, it rolled down thru' his face...slowly....hmmmm. His heart was burning....bleeding....But no one did care....on one...even GOD too....
"Come in...come into my heart...to put out d fire...to soothen it...."
She sat beside him...."Max, I've to leave soon..., dere is sumone else dere... waitin' for
me...."While kissing her warmly, while holding her tightly, while her eyes stared at him, while.....while the sharp silver knife in his left hand went right thru' her spinal cord , while her heart stopped beating....the dark fumy clouds slowly and patiently covered the full moon....as if to fade the single evidence away......
32 comments:
good picture
hiii mephisto. v r frm bangalore. dis is d first time v r writing a comment for ur blog.wat is ur real name and where do u liv??cud u plz tell us dat??
awrite frnd, ur blogs r all xcellent , alwys made our eyes wet,the poem ws also very nice,but this blog is simply awesome, and no words can describe it's beauty,v r gr8 fan of urs'.
take care and keep writing.
daaaaaa it causes grief on once mind who reads it..........the grief may b due to loosing one who love........."ur intention of writing this blog on the near by days of valentines day ";i can think........good one....keep on writing.
chettuuuuuu banglorinnu vare fanso!!!!!
enikk vayyyyayeeee
daaa mittuu nirthikkooode eee desp adikkunnathu???ninnod ethra time njan parnajthaada???
blog is kiddu ,but vendaaaaaa no more of this type.fans okke kooduvanalloda ninakku
aliya... wndrful... such bitches shud b xterminatd..
beauuuuuuuutifulllllllllllll!!!!!!!!!
ohk daa.... here goes mine... BEAUTIFUL!!!! i think this one describes everythin i want 2 say.... neva knew ther's another midhun in u... cool... and keep writin more....
b'lore fansaaaaaaaa !! easwara .....good goin chetttuuuuu !1
keep writing ..........great work :D
all i've to say is , i luv u
mittu, nee enneyum onnu kollumodaa athu pole?
if u wanna delete this one,yepp
u can.i dont giv a damn abt it!
nee sheriyaaville moneeee, enthokkeyaa ithu.neeyum ninte blog um pinne kure fans um.athinidakku oro proposals um.nirthikkollanam innathode ellammmm, unless kolamaakki kayyil tharum moneeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
simply superb!!!no words to describe it's charm!!!!ninne sammathichedaa!!!
thanikk ippo nammalonnum vendalo,valya aal aayallodo thaan,
neways blog kiddu,the best so far i think.keep blogging kettodooo.
hiiiiii, ur name is midhun rite?
nice one bro,ur narration style is breathtakingly awesome!!! each and every sentence appeared as a frame b4 me.keep it going on bro.
good one bro...u rock!!!
finally after all these cryin n weepin v got some action goin here...:D
ini enna oru succesful love story varunne?
successfull love story????? hehe....athonnum namuku paranjittila ente kutttaaaa.....
nee venel ninte story paranju thaaa...njan publish cheyyam...hehe
[:D]
mitttttuu ithavanayum 20th comment enikk thaneeee!!!! ente oru kaarayam!!!!!!
by the way kiddu stuff kettooo!!!!
nice one.
keep blogging.
Happy valentines day,dear midhun!!!!
v all luv u!!!
Lolsss!!!!!y r ya deletin' all those proposals [;;)] ????
well,keep writin,we r all waitin!!!
take care.
heyyyy 25 th one from meeeeee
luv uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu!!!!!!!!!!!!!
ithum koodi delete cheyyanam ketto
mr mittus........
hiiii y no blogs?
heyy,u stoppd ritin'????rite sumthin' my frnd.hope u r fine.take care.
chettuuu matte blog enthe???
athu chettu deleti.....
aaa kutty kku othiri vishamam aayyi
so....
thanx a lot dear , for deleting dat blog.
athum delete cheytho?:D
hehe..chettunte bloginte samayam athra sheriyallennu thonnunnu..bloginte jathakam nokku :P
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