She turned back...he was just behind her...a few steps behind..with a seducing smile on his face...she increased her pace ..somehow, reached home got into her room and looked out thru' the window....it was abt to rain.
She sighed...."why he is after ME?".For her, this was d first experience....no other boys in her class...no..not even in her school have n't ever looked at her
face..coz it was damn horrible ,wid white colored burns ,which came as a result of an accident a few years before...nd she was too lean and dark...nd even girls also feared to talk to her...but she was so good at heart...nobody did try to understand her... nd always alone...she was pretty gud at studies too....
And all on a sudden he came...a boy frm London....Chris...joined the same school,in her class...he was so handsome, dat u jez can't take ur eye from him ...He had got blond hair and blue eyes...all d girls in dat class secretly admired him....
Now it happened....he fell in love..nd with that girl, having the scariest face in that school.....bt she....she jez can,t imagine such a thing to happen.... One day after lunch he came to her and said..."Well ... I 've got somethin' to say"...she said"hmmmm..k wat's it?"..."eerrhh....it's actually...i..."he couldn't complete..she could see his yellowish white face turnig red and he started sweating...she said" hmmm....??" .." Well...i jez wanna say.... i love u" ...he gave a long gasp after saying dat....then smiled and ran out of the class...All oder girls in the class looked at her in envy ....."huhhh!!!!"
There it s
tarted....she too started loving him...Now she became the centre of attraction in the class..and she also felt proud abt herself....he was so caring and loving ...nd she was possessive too...nd was urging for love..which she didn't get frm newhere before.
One fine day in the afternoon he said "shall we go for a walk?".She said" Ohh..no ,it may rain"..."ahhaa..Common..we shall walk in the rain...Don't worry..I ll b e with u". On the way she asked "Where are we suppposed to go now"? " To the riverside...We shall watch the beautiful river flowing and watch the sunset frm dere....are u afraid??" ...she said"no..wat for?"
He sat on the grassy ground.The river was flowing in a slow pace. And she too sat beside him.A mild breeze moved by passing them.She moved a bit closer and placed her head on his shoulders.And asked" can i ask u something?" He said " yeah..why not?"...."why did u choose a girl like me?" ..." ohhh..i simply love u..nd i need u dats all"..he continued" and i have nt ever seen a charming and cute girl like u"...she was feeling weightlessness..."is it a dream ??" he pinched on her hand and said"wat do u feel now? " she smiled...
And then he placed her head on his lap.She didn't say a word.She was lo
oking at him...It was abt to rain...The sun himself got obscured behind the dark clouds.He leaned a bit towards front and raised her head a bit, and kissed her on her lips ...she didn't resist ..she enjoyed it as if she too was longing for it.He took a piece of cloth from his pocket and asked her to smell it...she said" Ohh!!!! it is smellimg so sweet..Wat is it?"..."hmmm...don't u kno ? it is the smell of desire...haven't u ever smelt it?"
Suddenly ...she heard the sound of thunder..no!!..no...it was from her heart ...she was losing her conscious...and it started raining slowly....A chameleon, which sat on the branch of a tree nearby ,staring at them, slowly....very slowly, changed its color. Soon it began raining heavily...damn heavily!!...
Hours went by...it was evening ..the sun was abt to set...she woke up frm sleep...he was looking at her...she suddenly searched for her clothes...and put them on ...she was crying like a kid ...bt he was indifferent....still the same charming smile on his face..."why ...why did u do this to me?? was it for this...u loved me?? i' m spoiled nd i 've lost ...." ...he didn't answer.She cried out"Anwer me ..u cheat!!!"
He raised his head and said" Ohhh...i 've told u ,dat i love u and i need u...yeah it is rite ..i won't regert...bt i didn't find nething wrong in it...i jez needed someone and some space to fulfill my fuming desires...and also, i 've slept with both white and black girls wen i was in london, nd u....u are both rite?? I found somethin different in u......nd really...u were more erotic than d oders..and so i chose u ..dats all!!!!...nd budyy, u r simply awesome nd i really enjoye...." he could not complete it .
Her right pal
m smashed on his face with immense velocity...it turned red , the same redness she saw on his face,wen he told her"i lov.....".Without wasting a second he walked back.
....She didn't even turn back...d sun had already set...still..still...some red rays coming frm behind the distant mountains..red....rays of desire, rays of sensuality,rays of devotion ,rays of betrayel ,rays of.... a liaison.
Suddenly a lightning flashed...nd followed by it a roaring thunder....she woke up frm thoughts....it was half past 6.00...nd was raining heavily outside... She looked into the mirror.... and cursed her fate...wat else she can do?.... Then took a new razor frm her shelf ...while removing its cover, she started counting 10, 9 , 8....hmmm... 7 months left.....
face..coz it was damn horrible ,wid white colored burns ,which came as a result of an accident a few years before...nd she was too lean and dark...nd even girls also feared to talk to her...but she was so good at heart...nobody did try to understand her... nd always alone...she was pretty gud at studies too....And all on a sudden he came...a boy frm London....Chris...joined the same school,in her class...he was so handsome, dat u jez can't take ur eye from him ...He had got blond hair and blue eyes...all d girls in dat class secretly admired him....
Now it happened....he fell in love..nd with that girl, having the scariest face in that school.....bt she....she jez can,t imagine such a thing to happen.... One day after lunch he came to her and said..."Well ... I 've got somethin' to say"...she said"hmmmm..k wat's it?"..."eerrhh....it's actually...i..."he couldn't complete..she could see his yellowish white face turnig red and he started sweating...she said" hmmm....??" .." Well...i jez wanna say.... i love u" ...he gave a long gasp after saying dat....then smiled and ran out of the class...All oder girls in the class looked at her in envy ....."huhhh!!!!"
There it s
tarted....she too started loving him...Now she became the centre of attraction in the class..and she also felt proud abt herself....he was so caring and loving ...nd she was possessive too...nd was urging for love..which she didn't get frm newhere before.One fine day in the afternoon he said "shall we go for a walk?".She said" Ohh..no ,it may rain"..."ahhaa..Common..we shall walk in the rain...Don't worry..I ll b e with u". On the way she asked "Where are we suppposed to go now"? " To the riverside...We shall watch the beautiful river flowing and watch the sunset frm dere....are u afraid??" ...she said"no..wat for?"
He sat on the grassy ground.The river was flowing in a slow pace. And she too sat beside him.A mild breeze moved by passing them.She moved a bit closer and placed her head on his shoulders.And asked" can i ask u something?" He said " yeah..why not?"...."why did u choose a girl like me?" ..." ohhh..i simply love u..nd i need u dats all"..he continued" and i have nt ever seen a charming and cute girl like u"...she was feeling weightlessness..."is it a dream ??" he pinched on her hand and said"wat do u feel now? " she smiled...
And then he placed her head on his lap.She didn't say a word.She was lo
oking at him...It was abt to rain...The sun himself got obscured behind the dark clouds.He leaned a bit towards front and raised her head a bit, and kissed her on her lips ...she didn't resist ..she enjoyed it as if she too was longing for it.He took a piece of cloth from his pocket and asked her to smell it...she said" Ohh!!!! it is smellimg so sweet..Wat is it?"..."hmmm...don't u kno ? it is the smell of desire...haven't u ever smelt it?"Suddenly ...she heard the sound of thunder..no!!..no...it was from her heart ...she was losing her conscious...and it started raining slowly....A chameleon, which sat on the branch of a tree nearby ,staring at them, slowly....very slowly, changed its color. Soon it began raining heavily...damn heavily!!...
Hours went by...it was evening ..the sun was abt to set...she woke up frm sleep...he was looking at her...she suddenly searched for her clothes...and put them on ...she was crying like a kid ...bt he was indifferent....still the same charming smile on his face..."why ...why did u do this to me?? was it for this...u loved me?? i' m spoiled nd i 've lost ...." ...he didn't answer.She cried out"Anwer me ..u cheat!!!"
He raised his head and said" Ohhh...i 've told u ,dat i love u and i need u...yeah it is rite ..i won't regert...bt i didn't find nething wrong in it...i jez needed someone and some space to fulfill my fuming desires...and also, i 've slept with both white and black girls wen i was in london, nd u....u are both rite?? I found somethin different in u......nd really...u were more erotic than d oders..and so i chose u ..dats all!!!!...nd budyy, u r simply awesome nd i really enjoye...." he could not complete it .
Her right pal
m smashed on his face with immense velocity...it turned red , the same redness she saw on his face,wen he told her"i lov.....".Without wasting a second he walked back.....She didn't even turn back...d sun had already set...still..still...some red rays coming frm behind the distant mountains..red....rays of desire, rays of sensuality,rays of devotion ,rays of betrayel ,rays of.... a liaison.
Suddenly a lightning flashed...nd followed by it a roaring thunder....she woke up frm thoughts....it was half past 6.00...nd was raining heavily outside... She looked into the mirror.... and cursed her fate...wat else she can do?.... Then took a new razor frm her shelf ...while removing its cover, she started counting 10, 9 , 8....hmmm... 7 months left.....

2 comments:
seriously u neva gave me a clue u cud write so well !! enthokke dialogue aaarunnnu !!
liked your narration style and that made all the diffrence !! :-D
keep wrting and dont ever tell me again that you cant write !!
okk good story.........ninnilum oriu kalahridayam urangi kidapundoooo??
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